What in the World?

 by Charlotte HingerI'm going through a novel, tightening wherever possible, and discovered the strangest thing. I dislike the construction of "said he" rather than "he said." But the "said he" usage is throughout my book. I have no idea how that happened, or why I didn't notice it. Thanks to the power of global searches, I will simply ask Word to find "said" and look at how it's used. Of course,